Typography: 2011

Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Heth

Patricia Smith: the paragraph needs to align to the left and follow the curve of the symbol to get rid of the black box between the paragraphs. The little bit of the paragraph at the top of the symbol needs to be put with rest of the paragraph; it just doesn't look right there. This is a knit-pick thing, but at the bottom of the paragraph, there's too much space between the period and the word Heth.

April Center: my favorite is the first design. I love how the text isn't in just one block, it's split up around the page and keeps my eyes moving, but on the lower right corner the spaces between the words bother me the way they are justified. I would like to see the text on the left also with the same spacing or either change the right side to be more like the left.

Kristen: I very much like this first symbol dominate pic. It's kinda like my first one, but laid out differently. I would make the text and display a little smaller and/or lighter so the symbol stands out.

Patricia Smith: lose the stroke on the symbol and fix the justification of the bottom paragraph.

April Center: the spaces between the words bother me.

Kristen: the text is off a bit. The spacing is off (with too much spaces between the words and needs fixing) so be careful with that when sizing and/or copy and pasting text.

Patricia Smith: there is more justification issues. The line with courtyard of the first paragraph or go across it.

April Center: the spaces draw a lot of attention. I think it would be a stronger design if the spaces between the words were equal.

Kristen: the text is off a bit. The spacing is off (with too much spaces between the words and needs fixing) so be careful with that when sizing and/or copy and pasting text.

Patricia Smith: the word Heth needs to be saturated so that it can pop out from the background. It blends too much with the background.

April Center: the is probably my second favorite, it's simple but still interesting. I wouldn't change a thing.

Kristen: I would change this symbol dominance pic because it looks similar to the first one. Maybe in this one, have less text and display and create some kind of design with the symbol, so that's the only thing popping at you when looking at the pic. So, incorporate more of the symbol in the symbol dominance pictures.